Thank you for your notes. By your leave, I offer clarifying comments --
Deus ex machina – The accepted definition of this phrase is a plot tactic in which something or someone is conveniently and unexpectedly introduced by an author to resolve or advance a plot conflict. Aristotle didn’t recommend ‘em, but writers from Shakespeare to the script team of the Sopranos used ‘em. I side with Gentle Will and David Chase.
Introducing Parka Man in the last pages of a novel to save our young hero fits the definition of a deus ex machina. I’m not saying this is a good thing or not-so-good thing or a polyanna thing. It is a manipulative thing, because it’s like a magician who gets us to look over here while the fuzzy bunny is over there. If deus es machinas weren’t useful story telling devices, authors wouldn’t use them.
The Pistol and Death with dignity.-- Imagine you’re on Jeopardy and the category is modern fiction. Question is: Name a CM character who has no friends, shuns people he doesn’t know, sees everyone around him as a potential enemy, is brave, resourceful and tenacious, has principles which he is willing and does kill for…. and, oh, yes, our guy is NOT in The Road.
You see the problem with Dad? Apart from being surrounded by cannibals, the man has issues.
He loves his son but teaches him how to shoot himself. He vows to kill anyone who touches his son. Then, fearing the pistol may misfire, he considers bashing son’s cute little skull with a rock. He refuses to come to the aid of children, AARPies, people struck by lightning or dogs. He strips naked and leaves for dead another outcast who stole from them. I think you can say about the father what another character said about Captain Ahab, “Madness made him mad.”
The son is the one who agitates for helping others, resists packing iron, resists replacing his own charitable instincts with his father’s disaster response tactics, and retains a sense of compassion – oh, yes, and is ultimately saved, if you take the ending literally.
There’s a POV that the father’s situation gave him no choice in his responses, but Parka “deus ex machina” Man took a different course and his family is still standing and can even take in another castaway.
The use of the deus ex machine does three things to wind up the TR plot: Dad’s sacrifices weren’t in vain; the son (at least temporarily) gets another chance; the reader who has imagined being in Dad’s situation throughout the book gets to re-evaluate the matter.
How would you end it? -- Well, I’m not rying to rewrite TR. I’m trying to see clearly what the author says through the text. So my approach to answering such a Q would be to imagine what the author might say over a bottle of Jameson.
CM might say -- This is a tightly-spun story of a worldwide (?) holocaust reduced to the lives of a father and a son. A more conventional ending would require more characters a/o more extensive development. My characters don’t even have names. So the deus ex machina worked.
CM might continue – Developing the book by introducing additional characters who would interact with the father could turn this important character into something like an obsessive, paranoid Ahab, although he has much to be obsessive and paranoid about.
CM might say that the sudden appearance of Parka Man isn’t a lot different than stumbling on a non-cannibal commune, though Dad might be a problem.
And after a little more Jameson, CM might throw his well-thumbed copy of Moby Dick at my head, and explain, “Speaking of convenient and unexpected endings – how about Ishmael getting a ride on Queequeg’s coffin! And being picked up by the Rachel! Without becoming lunch for a shark! How’s them Deus Ex Machinas? Go bother Melville, and leave me alone, for God’s sake!”
I’m not saying the DexM is bad, just that there is such a thing, it has an accepted definition, it’s commonly used, and it’s instructive to consider why it is used in a particular instance.
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